[Digital Awareness]
SCREENS Time & Its Effects
The main message of my project is that screen time has a significant impact on our daily lives, and people should be more aware of how much time they spend on their devices.
Reflective Statement
In this e-Portfolio, I chose to revise my project about screen time and its effects because it is something that affects people every day. Most people spend a lot of time on their phones, so I wanted to focus on a topic that is easy to relate to. One thing I worked on in this course was making my writing more clear and organized. In my earlier drafts, my ideas were there, but they were not always easy to follow.
During revision, I focused on improving my main idea and making my paragraphs more organized. I also tried to make a stronger argument about how too much screen time can affect mental health, focus, and relationships. I worked on making sure each paragraph connects back to my main point so the paper makes more sense overall.
I also learned how to use different ways to persuade the reader. I used facts and examples, but I also tried to make the topic feel more real so people can think about their own screen time habits.
Overall, this project helped me see that revision is more than fixing grammar. It is about improving your ideas and making your writing clearer. In the future, I want to keep working on making my writing more organized and stronger.